Editing (8)

I firstly filmed these shots of yasmin undressing in the bathroom, then under the water in the bath, struggling for breath,suggesting how she is helpless and the other individual in the relationship has to help her, as this is who she relies on. Yasmin looked successful whilst undressing as she looked attractive and cool, this was because she was slow and was in attempt to make it 'sexy.' 

However, I did notice my mistake whilst filming as Yasmin has suddenly gone from undoing her nude bra, to instead of bare breasted, she is seen in a black bandeau, I did attempt to make this non-noticeable by cropping the shot to not include her breast area, but the shot would have been too short and mostly focused on the background of the shot rather than Yasmin herself. Instead I re-attempted the shot several times but was still not as successful as I had wanted. The conclusion of my decision to change this shot to make it work, was to re-shoot again of yasmin in her nude bra in the bath and cutting the video of where she undresses herself of taking her bra off. I still have the shots of her undressing included, but I just got rid of the shot of her taking off the bra and the shot of her in a bandeau. I still used the idea of her under the water in the bath.